🚫 Stop Sending DMs That Reek of Desperation (Steal This Cold Message That Actually Got a Reply) 95% of DMs being sent right now? 💩 They read like a Fiverr VA copy-pasted it from a 2021 YouTube tutorial. You know the ones… ❌ "Hey [First Name], I help busy founders scale to 6-figures using my proven 3-step system…" ❌ "Quick question for you... 👀" ❌ "I saw your profile and thought we might be a great fit!" If you've ever sent one of those, this is your intervention. Because you're not just being ignored—you're being categorized. 🧠 As forgettable. 🗑️ As background noise. 📉 As someone not worth replying to. 🧠 How I Flipped It, just like @Jay Feldman teaches. Instead of ignoring a guy who'd been DM'ing me like an amnesiac AI… And this guy is a fairly well established influencer with a sizable IG, YT & Skool Community. I sent this: Not gonna lie --> you've hit me with more "Hey Ian"s & "How's Biz?" than an MLM recruiter w/ amnesia 😂 Figured I'd wait to reply until I had something worth showing. In the last 12 months: 222 new customers. $572K in revenue. {SCREENSHOT PROOF} All from a similar offer and audience size to yours. Not saying you're leaving money on the table... But if you are, your weak ass DM game is probably why. ✌️☮️ Guess what happens next? 👀 He replied instantly. Then booked a call. 🧨 Why It Worked ✅ Pattern interrupt – Casual. Funny. Not trying to sell. ✅ Leads with proof – No bait. Just data. ✅ Curiosity over pitch – Hints at the gap without bragging. ✅ Reverses the dynamic – He chased me. 💥 Want to Write DMs Like This? Here's the formula: Open with a jab – playful, honest, bold Drop results – numbers > adjectives Create curiosity – no neediness, just a window Position yourself as the shortcut – without pitching Shut up and let them ask 👉 𝘾𝙤𝙢𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩 "𝘿𝙈𝙎𝙇𝘼𝙋" 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙄'𝙡𝙡 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙅𝙖𝙮 𝘿𝙈 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖 𝙛𝙧𝙚𝙚 𝙩𝙤𝙤𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙧𝙚𝙬𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙚𝙨 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝘿𝙈'𝙨 It using the exact method above. Stop Getting Ignored. No more spam. No more guessing.

Could I write an email to my mom from somebody else’s address and be about 80% sure she would open it? Yes. Not because I am a copywriter. Because I know her. What she worries about. What she ignores. Which line she would never delete, even from a stranger. If you know a person that well, the open is not a mystery. It is a prediction. People don’t hate cold email. They hate mail that has nothing to do with them. Wrong industry. Wrong title. Wrong problem. Wrong moment. A message that proves you never looked at them — only at a row in a CSV. The inbox is not offended by outreach. It is offended by irrelevance. Stop testing your way out of a bad list. Subject lines, spintax, offer tests, new angles every week. None of that is useless. A lot of it is compensation for contacts you don’t actually understand. Most people in this school treat copy as the variable and the audience as the constant. Flip it. The audience is the variable. The copy is the output. I am not saying never test. Measure what you send. But if your first question is “what subject line should I test?” instead of “do I actually know these people?” you are optimizing the wrapper and ignoring the package. If you segment the data well enough, the open should feel closer to a forecast than a gamble. The mom test, applied Knowing them is not first name and company. That is mail merge. Can you answer this without guessing: who they are, what has to be true this week for your email to matter, the language they use with peers, and why they would open this from a stranger? Demographics get you in the zip code. Role, trigger, timing, and language get you in the house. If two contacts share a title but not a problem, they do not belong in the same send. That is not a copy problem. That is a segmentation problem wearing a copy costume. Do this before you write • If you cannot explain who they are in one sentence, you do not know them yet. • Split until the segment is obvious. “SaaS founders” is not a segment.

Hey people, What is an healthy amount of spintax? Because I use Instantly to help me out on this, but this becomes complicated. It's not good enough and I spend too much time on it for corrections. (One person company) What do you use?

Guys, What have you been using to write personalized lines? I've tried AI, Instantly and pretty much all other alternatives. Nothing is worth using when you pull data from Google maps in Omkarcloud. Even prompts using reviews and just generic. Do you have some tips? Because right now I let this go for the reasons above, I'm new to this, I might be ignorant

Cold Email Copy for eCom Amazon Agency targeting eCom Amazon brand owners Can you write better copy for this? Need feedback as well. ---------------------------------------------- Subject: quick question ---------------------------------------------- V1 Copy (Opener) {{firstName}}! Wasn't quite sure if I should reach out to you or someone else at {{brand}}, but I noticed your Amazon store isn't fully dominating your own brand name in search results. Competitors are showing up when customers look for you specifically. This past year I've worked with 23 DTC Amazon brands (a lot like {{brand}}) fixing exactly this. I recently helped a jewelry brand 50X their monthly revenue, scaling from $10K → $500K in just 3 months (hard to believe, but it's true). I've already put together a quick analysis on {{brand}} showing exactly where you're leaving revenue on the table and what to fix first. I'd just need your permission to share it with you. Just reply "YES" and I'll send it over. Best, Karl @ Company P.S. No charge, completely on us. "If you’d rather not to bothered, reply 'no thanks'." ---------------------------------------------- V2 Copy (Opener) {{firstName}}, wasn’t quite sure if I should reach out to you or someone else at {{brand}} - but your Amazon store is not fully dominating in search results when customers look for your brand specifically - your competitors are showing up instead. I recently helped a jewelry brand go from $10K → $500K/mo in 3 months. 50X sounds crazy right? (but it's true). I've put together a quick analysis on {{brand}} showing where exactly you're leaving revenue on the table. Mind if I send it over? Just reply “YES”. Best, Karl @ Company P.S. No charge, completely on us. "If you’d rather not be bothered, reply 'no thanks'." ---------------------------------------------- V3 Copy (Opener) {{firstName}}, why are your competitors popping up when I search for {{brand}} specifically on Amazon search results? If it’s not me, then your customers are seeing the exact same thing.