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Cold Email Copy Feedback

Hi guys - about to launch my first cold email campaign. I am split testing 4 different sets of copy but I would love to get some feedback on this. Just for context, Im new to cold email & I am starting off by trying B2B agencies between $20k/$200k/month needing to break the barrier to scale predictably

Hey {{first_name}}

Quick question — ever feel like your pipeline’s that one house plant you keep watering… and somehow it’s still dying?

Most founders I talk to in the $20K–$200K/month range say the same thing: “We’re doing the work — why isn’t more happening?”

We’ve been helping them fix that by actually starting convos with the *right* people, at scale — not just throwing random stuff into inboxes and hoping it sticks (like this email, kinda, in a good way).

Want me to show you how that works?

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