3d • Copywriting ✍️
Is this different enough to get replies in agency cold email?
Would love some honest feedback on this cold email I’m testing for agencies, trying to sell lead generation services to them.
Goal is to lead with value (lead list + outreach angle) without sounding like a typical lead gen pitch.
Hey {{FirstName}},
This might be slightly off but I was looking at {{Company}} and had a thought.
I pulled together a small list of companies similar to your current clients that you could realistically land, and outlined how I’d approach them to turn this into a steady flow of conversations.
Made sure they actually align with what you’re already doing.
Might be completely wrong here, so I didn't want to run with it without checking with you first.
Want me to send it over?
Main thing I’m trying to figure out:
• Does this feel different enough from typical cold emails?
• Is the “value-first” angle clear without sounding like a pitch?
• Anything you’d tweak to increase reply rate?
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Is this different enough to get replies in agency cold email?
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