ROAST MY COPY - AI service for Solar companies
Hey G's This is a campaign thta will go live next week and i wanted some feedback on my copy. OFFER: i offer AI automation and AI calling agents to increase the number of leads that convert from their Google or Meta ads. After a lead clicks on their ad my system would make SURE that they book a meeting with the solar company. COPY variant 1: ------------------------------ {{firstname}}, Quickly calling Leads ------------------------------ Hey {{firstname}}, do you feel like your expensive leads are being wasted? Smaller solar companies see a 30-40% increase in conversion when they call leads quickly. Since leads need to be contacted in the heat of the moment. Have you tried a system that does this for {{companyname}}? {{signature}} ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ COPY variant 2: ------------------------------ {{firstname}}, Quickly calling Leads ------------------------------ Hey {{firstname}}, do you feel like your expensive leads are being wasted? Smaller solar companies see a 30-40% increase in conversion when they call leads quickly. Since leads need to be contacted in the heat of the moment. Want to see how this worked for another solar company? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ COPY variant 3: ------------------------------ {{firstname}}, Quick question ------------------------------ Hey {{firstname}}, Are your Meta leads being contacted under 60 seconds? Most small solar teams lose 30–50% of leads simply because reps can’t call instantly. Would automating this be valuable to {{companyname}} ? {{Signature}} Sent from my iPhone ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ COPY variant 4: ------------------------------ {{companyname}} could do more volume ------------------------------ Hey {{firstname}}, What's stopping you from tripling your ad spend?