Cold email sequence critique (DTC apparel ecom, service offer)
Hey guys, just finished a copy sequence, which I'm planning to launch soon, but I'd love a sharp feedback from anyone actively running cold email for agencies or selling services in ecom first. ICP: DTC Apparel ecommerce brands in the $1-$10M ARR range using shopify What I'm selling: Email lifecycle system for DTC apparel (capture - welcome - flows - campaigns) Email 1 sl: quick question about {{CompanyName}}âs first visit {{FirstName}}, Quick q: {{observation}} (e.g. âon {{CompanyName}}, the first thing I see is an email capture that doesnât give first-time visitors a clear reason to opt in.â) Is that intentional for first-time visitors? {{accountSignature}} Email 2 sl: first-visit capture vs paid retargeting {{FirstName}}, Reason Iâm asking: for apparel, the first session is usually the cheapest moment to turn paid visits into owned audience. If visitors leave without opting in, youâre mostly relying on retargeting (more spend) for a second shot. Are you optimizing more for brand-clean UX, or higher first-visit capture at the moment? {{accountSignature}} Email 3 sl: 15â25% of first-time visitors opt in {{FirstName}}, We helped one apparel brand tighten first-visit capture, pushing popup signups into the ~15â25 percent range. Over the same window, email-attributed revenue stayed consistently strong month to month (Klaviyo tracking), and total monthly revenue grew from ~5.8k usd to ~21.1k usd across 4 months. Want me to send a 2-min Loom showing the 3 changes? {{accountSignature}} Email 4 sl: paying twice for the same visitor {{FirstName}}, If youâre happy with current capture, ignore me. When visitors leave without opting in, youâre paying to acquire that attention again. Thatâs why {{CompanyName}} stood out when I checked the first-visit experience. If itâs not a priority at the moment, totally fine. If it is, I can send a quick teardown + the exact popup/welcome setup weâd test first. {{accountSignature}}