Asalamu Alaikum @Nabeel Azeez The Google doc below explains the situation, context and copy. Thanks— https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dqNadHdt4SIhdjSREKQP6wSfJH3pGyPCXsHaubwVFFA/edit?usp=sharing

I updated the page based on the recommended Book-a-call format. My wife accidentally edited the footage in Instagram format and deleted the raw footage, so we'll just have to make do with the current video for a bit. Might fill the sides with some b-roll. Any other suggestions ya'll? https://clarity.moonieful.com/moonieview-cold

Here's the offer I shared earlier, but for cold traffic https://clarity.moonieful.com/moonieview-cold

My first attempt at Zhi Style Offer It is a low ticket digital product with traffic funneled from the FB ads. A more detailed description of the product is in the doc. Thank you UPDATE - improved it, saved in PDF with design so it is more visible, it was weird in text, comments are open. Not sure if it is acceptable https://drive.google.com/file/d/11oZToE1kbGmfe0tpY_j2_n12vrU3ObQK/view?usp=sharing

I am trying to find a junior copywriter role in marketing agencies. I am sharing my recent outreach and I would love to get feedback on how I can make it a lot better. I send a cold email to the decision makers of the agency and attach a loom video along side it. here is the email I sent. I tried slightly differentiated emails to see what works and I have sent it to two people in the company I probably sound too robotic, I tried my best not to but I cant help but notice it ( would love to have some feedback on how I can improve this ) Here is the attached loom : https://www.loom.com/share/1cd5dc5642ad4a36bae7371f0f117b8e I havent applied with CV or cover letters - Quite frankly I dont know what to put in them since I just have had 1 client work and testimony and I try to explain as much as I can in the loom itself. Website of the agency : https://rsd.com.au/ Some questions I have : 1. How to build a CV with not a lot of prior work 2. Since I am attaching a loom video, what message should be in the email and in the loom (separately) 3. Is it worth looking at other outreaching methods ? 4. I always get stuck on the subject line, I know the aim of the SL should be to open the email but can I have more tips on how I can stand out - esp when I cannot find personal/relevant things to include 5. Any tips to improve the video audit (Thank you to Nabeel to checking up on me and encouraging to post about this)