How can I improve my outreaches ? · Copywriting Launchpad

Anupam Parajuli

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How can I improve my outreaches ?

I am trying to find a junior copywriter role in marketing agencies.

I am sharing my recent outreach and I would love to get feedback on how I can make it a lot better.

I send a cold email to the decision makers of the agency and attach a loom video along side it.

here is the email I sent.

I tried slightly differentiated emails to see what works and I have sent it to two people in the company

I probably sound too robotic, I tried my best not to but I cant help but notice it ( would love to have some feedback on how I can improve this )

Here is the attached loom : https://www.loom.com/share/1cd5dc5642ad4a36bae7371f0f117b8e

I havent applied with CV or cover letters - Quite frankly I dont know what to put in them since I just have had 1 client work and testimony and I try to explain as much as I can in the loom itself.

Website of the agency : https://rsd.com.au/

Some questions I have :

How to build a CV with not a lot of prior work
Since I am attaching a loom video, what message should be in the email and in the loom (separately)
Is it worth looking at other outreaching methods ?
I always get stuck on the subject line, I know the aim of the SL should be to open the email but can I have more tips on how I can stand out - esp when I cannot find personal/relevant things to include
Any tips to improve the video audit

(Thank you to Nabeel to checking up on me and encouraging to post about this)

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How can I improve my outreaches ?