Two ads, which one's better?
Hey everyone, so I'm posting 2 ads (not exactly 2 ads, 1 ad with 2 variations). Which one do you think is better? I have my theory, but I want to know what you guys think. Thanks for the help.
Ad 1:
Hook:
Bone broth companies don’t want you to know this.
Body:
Most bone broth cartons are basically expensive water.
You’re paying to store it, carry it home, and then half the time, you don’t even use the carton before it goes bad.
Money literally going down the drain.
That’s why I switched to bone broth concentrate.
This 1 jar make 25 cups of bone broth.
Just add a scoop to hot water and you’ve got rich, nourishing bone broth in seconds.
Use it as a drink, add it to soups, sauces, rice, or any recipe that needs a flavor boost.
And because you’re adding your own water, it works out up to 5 times cheaper than buying cartons.
From less than a dollar per serve.
Right now, you can get all three flavors in a bundle and a 4th jar free.
That’s over a month’s supply of bone broth.
Try today and thank me later.
Ad 2:
Hook:
Most bone broth is 95% water you’re paying to ship and store
Body:
That’s why savvy people switched to bone broth concentrate.
One jar makes 25 cups.
You’re only paying for the actual nutrients, not the liquid.
Just add hot water and you’re got rich, nourishing broth in seconds.
Use it as a drink, add it to soups, sauces, rice, or any recipe that needs a flavor.
And because you’re adding your own water, it works out up to 5 times cheaper than buying cartons.
From less than a dollar per serve.
Right now, you can grab all three flavors in a bundle plus a fourth jar free.
That’s over a month’s supply.
Try today and thank me later.
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Shafaq Kazmi
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Two ads, which one's better?
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