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Practice Email - Would Love Your Feedback
Hey everyone 👋
I practiced writing an email for a real estate coaching business and would really appreciate your feedback.
Target audience: Beginner real estate investors who are skeptical of high-ticket coaching because they've seen negative reviews or been disappointed by theory-heavy programs. The goal is to get them to join a free community before introducing the paid coaching offer.
I'd especially love feedback on:
- Does the hook make you want to keep reading?
- Are there any logical gaps or points where trust drops?
- Does the offer feel clear and believable?
- Where does the copy lose your attention?
, if you get a chance, I'd especially appreciate your thoughts since I'm actively working on improving my email copy.
Thanks in advance!
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Practice Email - Would Love Your Feedback
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