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Copy Critique Request

Hello, everyone. I am writing copy for a ladies only salon led by a woman named Hamda. Her main target market are muslim women (most of whom happen to be black) and black women more broadly.

I have struggled to write for the bridal website in particular as I wasn’t able to find any indirect voice of customer data. So the document below pertains to the main website copy for the home page.

I’d appreciate any feedback and advice. Thank you!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OkQ5oe9RXj3-YuzY_PIUWBpT3FUOgOY73fATjPU3KMs/edit?usp=drivesdk

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