同學寫的快閃小說
我們的學員 看了電子書的第一部影片,寫了一篇快閃小說跟我分享(flash fiction),看完後我心想:「很有八點檔的味道,不跟大家分享實在太浪費了!」
是不是該幫她下個標題?😍
In the evening, Tom, Amy, and Sandra are having dinner and catching up.
"Hey, how's it going? Is everything okay with your wife?" Amy asked.
"Not really, I found that she cheated on me yesterday, so we fought," Tom replied with a depressed face.
Sandra slammed the table and said out loud, "Aha, I knew it! I saw it coming when she hung out with her co-worker last month!!"
"Co-worker? Who is he?" Amy started getting confused.
"Remember I told you I saw his wife with a man in the grocery store? He is her co-worker in the company, and also, they were classmates in middle school. If my memory was correct, he did well in school and was a popular guy", Sandra whispered.
"I was gonna talk to her calmly, but my emotions controlled me at the time, so we ended up arguing rather than talking. I wasn't thinking clearly," Tom sighed.
"Do you have any plans about what you are going to do in the future? We can help you", said Amy.
"Thanks, but you can't hold my hand forever. I have to handle it myself."
Suddenly, Sandra held everyone’s arms intensely and said, "Hey! I have an idea...."
"Hold on, don't get any funny ideas." Amy interrupted what Sandra was going to say at the time.
"You don't even know what I was gonna say. Maybe.... it would help!"
"No! It won't," Tom and Amy said together.
To prevent Sandra from becoming sad, Tom immediately comforted her," I see where you're coming from. But I can address it, trust me."
"Alright. Last question, does he have a wife or girlfriend? "
"Not that I know of," Tom shrugged.
"Anyway, it's time to head home. Sandra, how do you get around? You don't have a car, right?" Amy said.
"I will get around with public transportation."
我僅做了部分的微調,其他原封不動。
片語用得很恰當,語氣自然,感覺真的是朋友之間會出現的話語。
這位同學不是第一次寫故事,我們在過去一年的貴賓課有練習寫快閃小說,
She is also a reader. 所以這篇故事性特別完整不是偶然的,Big thumbs up!
有買電子書的你,有在故事看到新片語嗎?
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單字小抄
  • catch up 聊天互更
  • cheat on someone 劈某人腿
  • slam 甩(門」)
  • interrupt 打斷
  • shrug 聳肩
  • whisper 細語
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想學習最自然、親近的語言嗎?
看看巴奈的電子書 ⬇️
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