Love this @Eslam Khaled and can't wait to hear how you go by Friday. I will make sure others share some commitments under this post by the time we have our call today 😉

Love the goals, and looking forward to keeping you in that mode of execution, and finishing the year strong. I'm assuming yesterday was your first day of recording the course? How did that go? 😃

@Ryan Wiens good to know! That's progress. And since you mentioned Adam Sandler in your post today, I can't help but make a Zohan reference...

@Maria Glazunova wow, it looks like something you'd get in a restaurant! I love sushi, but my partner's allergic to fish so we never eat it together hah.

Great stuff @Eslam Khaled I'll take a look for you. And if you're around for tomorrow's Office Hours call, I can give you some feedback live ☺️

Looks pretty solid as a starting point, Eslam, really clear niche and strong system. A few things I’d suggest: 1. Amplify the problem section more. Right now it’s a bit light, but the pain of burnout + 60-hour weeks is what will grab reps fast. 2. The ‘first month free’ piece is powerful but I don't like the phrasing. I’d make that a bold risk-reversal headline (‘Love it or leave it’) instead of a small line. 3. Be careful with ‘bi-weekly coaching’... I could read as 2x/week, maybe clarify as ‘every 2 weeks.’ if that's how you'll run it. 4. Social proof feels a little thin. Two testimonials is a good start, but any more quota-driven wins or screenshots would build trust fast (even your own proof) 5. Your personal story is gold, I'd bring it up earlier so they see you’ve lived this problem yourself. If we have time in OH, I can spend a bit more time on this @Eslam Khaled

@Flor Maria Cruz or even how you could record one with the 3 biggest mistakes you see (and it's likely their profile has one or more of them) Then you could push this video out more frequently and with higher volume.

@Flor Maria Cruz true, I get you. Even a video which lays out these problems. Then you can offer to send it to those who are 'making 1 of these mistakes'. And after the video, they'll likely see something in there: - no opt-in whatsoever (no bueno) - no opt-in after newsletter) - confusing CTA's So on, so forth. Just a thought asa recyclable video so you don't need to create from scratch every time. That way, the personalised Loom could be replaced with a 20-minute call invite to 'audit' their funnel and make your offer after they've seen your video. I'm just trying to think of ways to save you time. But hey, you can keep going with the personal Loom too, this is just another potential angle.