NGÀY 6 - THỬ THÁCH 7 NGÀY

Em chưa kịp hoàn thành video ngày hôm nay, em chỉ mới kịp soạn script, nên em sẽ update nội dung script ở đây.

Dựa vào những điểm mạnh, vị thế em đang xây dựng cũng như nhóm khách hàng mà em quyết định nhắm tới, em đã chắt lọc ra cái điểm cốt lõi để trình bày trong video của mình và dự định ghi hình video có thời lượng dưới 3'

"Hello, I’m Bich Thao, and Mee is my English name.

There is a truth I often see: You may excel in your career, but that doesn’t necessarily mean you can produce a thesis of equivalent stature.

This is a realization many managers don't face until they actually start writing. You possess extensive experience, sharp insights, and strong leadership skills. Yet, in the academic world, a glaring gap appears: Your ideas are powerful, but your words fail to carry their full weight.

Most people believe this is a linguistic issue. In reality, it lies deeper: You are using the language of action in an environment that demands the language of argument.

This gap is why many lose control over their structure, leading to disjointed arguments that lack scholarly impact. Throughout 6 years of advising MBA and MSc candidates, I’ve realized that those who struggle the most are often the most experienced. Their wealth of knowledge simply hasn’t been accurately 'translated' into academic language.

My role is not just to fix your words. I help you restructure your ideas, transforming practical expertise into systematic reasoning while preserving your unique professional voice.

The goal is not an 'acceptable' thesis, but a piece of writing that clearly demonstrates your intellect and meets international standards.

If you feel your ideas are not being represented at their true level, send me a message. Let’s review your draft together to identify exactly what is holding you back. Let’s close that gap together."

Mong nhận được góp ý của mọi người, trước mắt là về nội dung của bản script này. Về cách dùng từ, liệu có bị quá hàn lâm hay không.

Ngoài ra, em gửi tài khoản linkedin của em: https://www.linkedin.com/in/nguy%E1%BB%85n-ng%E1%BB%8Dc-b%C3%ADch-th%E1%BA%A3o-563198

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