Would love feedback on my revised Advantage Language. I reorganized it by area of the "life wheel" (i.e., mental health, health & fitness, relationships, career, etc.) My one concern is that I don't want to overpromise on what the club can deliver! The main offering is healthy coping skills to maintain sobriety. But with this revision, I'm leaning more into the concept of going from merely coping to thriving. The idea being that having healthy coping skills will help people get out of survival mode and address whatever area(s) of their life needs improvement. Thanks to anyone who has time to look this over! (And @Cate Stillman I'm still not a fan of the PPT bubbles, but at least it's in PPT now. ; ))

Here's my current pitch deck, with a couple of slides still to be finished. I also have a few that are "hidden" as I'm updating them. I went with bold, solid colors with some minimal accents, and I haven't used a ton of graphics, which I may still add more of here and there. Would love any feedback y'all have to share.

Here is my finalized pitch deck (minus some slides at the end that are graphics I held on to). I am open to feedback and particularly looking for some feedback on the graphics in alignment with my branding. What do you think? https://www.canva.com/design/DAGvN_t_zHU/037-wQIQRo1YSdC9-N6FNw/edit?utm_content=DAGvN_t_zHU&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

My buisness is called Mind Body Bright (glow with soul). I've called my program in the past Glow with Soul (inner wisdom, outer radiance) I'm part of a big mom/entreprenuer community and shard my one page biz. plan. A number of women commented (who re NOT in our field, but coipy writers, lawyers you name it) that they did not understand what "Glow with Soul" meant. So 4 years ago when I ran my first YHC inspired year long I called it Be Bold and Thrive. I'm wondering if that is more clear - I'm thinking for my new Club/ Circle calling it "Be Bold and Thrive (over 45)" - I niche to midlife ladies. I'd love to hear any feedback and if it's a more direct, self-explanatory title for my proigram. Just gathering information. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE paula

I’m looking ahead at next week’s lineup—and the Tracker Session WPA on Tuesday, September 23rd is front and center. 📊 Come join us! We’ll: ✅ Review your progress ✅ Identify your next moves ✅ Keep you on track with WPA. We’ll follow the The WPA Coaching Guide and use the WPA Tracker in Classroom as our resource. Mark your calendar—this is your space to reset, refocus, and move forward with clarity. Think of this as a working meeting where I guide you through the structure. 📅Tuesday, September 23rd