29d • Copywriting ✍️
ROAST MY COPY - AI service for Solar companies
Hey G's
This is a campaign thta will go live next week and i wanted some feedback on my copy.
OFFER: i offer AI automation and AI calling agents to increase the number of leads that convert from their Google or Meta ads. After a lead clicks on their ad my system would make SURE that they book a meeting with the solar company.
COPY variant 1:
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{{firstname}}, Quickly calling Leads
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Hey {{firstname}}, do you feel like your expensive leads are being wasted?
Smaller solar companies see a 30-40% increase in conversion when they call leads quickly. Since leads need to be contacted in the heat of the moment.
Have you tried a system that does this for {{companyname}}?
{{signature}}
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COPY variant 2:
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{{firstname}}, Quickly calling Leads
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Hey {{firstname}}, do you feel like your expensive leads are being wasted?
Smaller solar companies see a 30-40% increase in conversion when they call leads quickly. Since leads need to be contacted in the heat of the moment.
Want to see how this worked for another solar company?
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COPY variant 3:
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{{firstname}}, Quick question
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Hey {{firstname}}, Are your Meta leads being contacted under 60 seconds?
Most small solar teams lose 30–50% of leads simply because reps can’t call instantly.
Would automating this be valuable to {{companyname}} ?
{{Signature}}
Sent from my iPhone
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COPY variant 4:
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{{companyname}} could do more volume
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Hey {{firstname}}, What's stopping you from tripling your ad spend?
Alex Hormozi's principles say you should do way more to get way more results.
But if you did that, would the first part that would fail be the appointment setting? Because you'd have to handle hundreds of calls.
I've built a system to completely automate calls with the best salesman you could think of for {{companyname}}.
Worth a look?
{{signature}}
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PLEASE let me know which one is your favorite and how you would improve it.
THANKS!
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ROAST MY COPY - AI service for Solar companies
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