Dec '24 ā¢ Blurbs, Tag Lines, and Ad Copy
Blurb help, pleaseš
I'm working on the blurb for book #2 in the series, and it's just not generating a lot of pre-orders. Any thoughts on how to improve it are very welcome.
Allās fair in love and warā¦until a professional hockey star skates into town, wounded hero that he is, and pucks everything up.
Since the first worst day of her life, Army veteran Emma Larson has spent the last sixteen years building walls to keep herself focused on the things that matter: her bookstore, the aunts who raised her, the JV hockey team she coaches, and her palomino, Hoopla. The last thing she needs is her high school rival, Bobby Frickinā Marshall, home after a potentially career-ending injury.
Heās just so d*mned cheerful. Whether he challenges her to arm wrestling, or turns up at her hockey practice, or comes to monster book club night at the store, he never loses that celebrity smile. Each time, he chips at the mortar holding her walls in place, and she is not okay with it.
Even if, maybe, heās a little good looking. Maybe a lot good-looking, if one watches his backside as he moves on the ice.
The more games they play, the more the rules confuse her, and she doesnāt need confusion. If he ever learns the devastating truths about her past, choosing whoās on the volunteer list at the Harvest Festival Kissing Booth is going to be the least of her problems.
Are they playing for loveā¦or for forever? Win Me Over is a steamy, reverse grumpy-sunshine romance with rivals to lovers, matchmaking aunties, light suspense, and small town fall festivities.
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