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About Page Question

I used the about page template to revamp my page after switching from paid to freemium. I thought it was pretty clear, but it scored terribly on Evelyn's about page checker in the traffic challenge. 🥴 Before rewriting it, I thought I would share the before and after here to see if anyone had feedback about what I might be missing in the transition. (The before version passed Evelyn's checker, but it doesn't work for freemium).

Previous About Page:

✨ Intuitive Art for Nervous-System Regulation & Soulful Living ✨

Access the clarity, peace, and flow you've been seeking. When your nervous system is calm, you rise into a higher vibrational state where divine guidance and manifestation flow with ease.

We use intuitive art as a sacred portal—a way to quiet the overthinking mind and slip into flow where clarity, insight, and guidance come alive. This is not about “making art.” It’s a creative dialogue with your Soul.

🎨 No art skills needed—just an open heart and the willingness to explore.

Inside this community, you’ll discover simple yet powerful practices that help you:

🌿 regulate your nervous system and release stress

🌿 gently move through stuck emotions

🌿 access the wisdom of your Soul

🌿 reconnect to your deeper purpose and clarity

✨ Enjoy weekly live art circles, step-by-step art classes, and a vibrant, heart-led community that reminds you of who you truly are: a limitless divine being, here to live with clarity, connection, and trust.

New About Page:

Are you a spiritual woman who struggles to actually live what you believe?

Hi, I'm Dara. I've been on a spiritual path for over thirty years, but most of that time I felt frustrated and unfulfilled. I understood all of the spiritual concepts (manifestation, spirit guides, divine guidance, high vibration, etc.) but didn't REALLY know how to LIVE from a place of spiritual connection. When I started using intuitive painting as a form of meditation, I FINALLY got it! This isn't about making art. It's a creative dialogue with your Soul. No art skills needed, promise! Intuitive painting calms your nervous system and drops you into a meditative state, effortlessly.

This is for you if:

🔮you love all things spiritual-"woo-woo"

🫶you crave a supportive community of like-minded women

🎨you want a way to come back into alignment when life feels chaotic

🧘‍♀️you want to meditate but can't seem to stick with it

Inside, you'll get:

🎨 The Watercolor Flow A.R.T. Course

💞 A heart-led community

📆 Monthly calls

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