I used the about page template to revamp my page after switching from paid to freemium. I thought it was pretty clear, but it scored terribly on Evelyn's about page checker in the traffic challenge. 🥴 Before rewriting it, I thought I would share the before and after here to see if anyone had feedback about what I might be missing in the transition. (The before version passed Evelyn's checker, but it doesn't work for freemium). Previous About Page: ✨ Intuitive Art for Nervous-System Regulation & Soulful Living ✨ Access the clarity, peace, and flow you've been seeking. When your nervous system is calm, you rise into a higher vibrational state where divine guidance and manifestation flow with ease. We use intuitive art as a sacred portal—a way to quiet the overthinking mind and slip into flow where clarity, insight, and guidance come alive. This is not about “making art.” It’s a creative dialogue with your Soul. 🎨 No art skills needed—just an open heart and the willingness to explore. Inside this community, you’ll discover simple yet powerful practices that help you: 🌿 regulate your nervous system and release stress 🌿 gently move through stuck emotions 🌿 access the wisdom of your Soul 🌿 reconnect to your deeper purpose and clarity ✨ Enjoy weekly live art circles, step-by-step art classes, and a vibrant, heart-led community that reminds you of who you truly are: a limitless divine being, here to live with clarity, connection, and trust. New About Page: Are you a spiritual woman who struggles to actually live what you believe? Hi, I'm Dara. I've been on a spiritual path for over thirty years, but most of that time I felt frustrated and unfulfilled. I understood all of the spiritual concepts (manifestation, spirit guides, divine guidance, high vibration, etc.) but didn't REALLY know how to LIVE from a place of spiritual connection. When I started using intuitive painting as a form of meditation, I FINALLY got it! This isn't about making art. It's a creative dialogue with your Soul. No art skills needed, promise! Intuitive painting calms your nervous system and drops you into a meditative state, effortlessly.

Woah, that was FUN! We covered how to write emails to softly sell your Skool community… without just saying “BUY MY THING" - 7 types of emails you can send - a bunch of examples - Q&A time The replay has now moved into our Premium tier in our Skool Copy Essentials course. 🥰 P.S. THANK YOU to those who joined live, it was fun!

👉 CLOSED FOR NEW SUBMISSIONS. (READ THE PINNED COMMENT!) Drop your link below and I’ll record a short, honest Loom vid on how to improve it. A few brief notes (so we're on the same page!): - This will be high-level + strategic (not a full rewrite) - I’ll focus on 1–2 things that will move the needle MOST - I’ll film as many as I can and may cap it once I hit my limit or lose my voice (whichever comes first, LOL) 😅 I don’t usually do this publicly… but let’s call it a one-off community experiment. 😜 If you're wondering... ..."Is my About page ACTUALLY clear?" ..."Would a random visitor 'get' what my community's about in 5 seconds?" ..."Does it even sound like ME??" Let’s find out. 😉 Alright... who's brave & wants to go first?? 👀🔥 Am I crazy for doing this? Probably. Let's freakin' go! P.S. if you have NOT written your page yet or need to improve it first, start with this about page template & training

We're about to welcome our 200th member in here since I opened this community 5 days ago Should we do something a little WILD to celebrate? This is probably crazy BUT... What about ABOUT PAGE REVIEWS? Like, I will roast your page + give you a couple of key takeaways on how to improve it. If we get enough votes... let's say AT LEAST 30... - I'll create a post here in the morning for you to comment on and I'll review as many pages as I can. Let's go rogue + have some fun. Why not?! P.S. Know anyone who would LOVE to get their about page roasted, or even just grab our FREE About Page copy template from the classroom? Click the yellow INVITE button on the RHS of this page (on desktop) and share it with them. I've also got affiliate commission turned on. So you'll also get a sweet 40% commission if anyone you refer buys a one-time course OR upgrades to premium or VIP in the future. P.P.S. If you want access to EVERY copy template + workshop (+ FUTURE workshops) in the classroom OR copy reviews, take a squiz at our plans >> A few lovely people have already snuck in under the radar and upgraded (even though I haven't mentioned this anywhere yet?!) So that's really cool! ❤️ P.P.P.S I found this GIF the other day and it made me L-O-L. SO, here it is for your viewing pleasure.