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Feedback for Outreach Copy

Hey everyone! 👋

What do you think of this outreach copy?

I’m trying out a new website audit approach using Lighthouse and combining it with hyper-personalized cold outreach.

Here’s the template I’m working with:

hey [first_name], I came across [company_name] and thought the way you [small detail you liked] was a smart detail, also noticed [another detail]—subtle but thoughtful

I checked your site and ran a Lighthouse audit—showed it is {{RANDOM|

not receiving full credit from Google|being overlooked by Google|not favored by Google| not acknowledged properly by Google}}. I also saw a few things that could be holding it back—[details in the UI analysis]

I’ve worked with 50+ [niche] businesses, I helped them improve their {{RANDOM|ROI| conversion rates| digital impact}}

Just reply{{RANDOM|

for a free audit with some ideas for how you can also boost your website’s performance.

|and I’ll share a tailored landing page draft designed to boost your results.

|and I’ll create a personalized landing page plan to help drive better outcomes.

|and I’ll send you a landing page designed to improve your website performance.}}

Best,

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