Feedback for Outreach Copy
Hey everyone! š What do you think of this outreach copy? Iām trying out a new website audit approach using Lighthouse and combining it with hyper-personalized cold outreach. Hereās the template Iām working with: hey [first_name], I came across [company_name] and thought the way you [small detail you liked] was a smart detail, also noticed [another detail]āsubtle but thoughtful I checked your site and ran a Lighthouse auditāshowed it is {{RANDOM| not receiving full credit from Google|being overlooked by Google|not favored by Google| not acknowledged properly by Google}}. I also saw a few things that could be holding it backā[details in the UI analysis] Iāve worked with 50+ [niche] businesses, I helped them improve their {{RANDOM|ROI| conversion rates| digital impact}} Just reply{{RANDOM| for a free audit with some ideas for how you can also boost your websiteās performance. |and Iāll share a tailored landing page draft designed to boost your results. |and Iāll create a personalized landing page plan to help drive better outcomes. |and Iāll send you a landing page designed to improve your website performance.}} Best, {{sendingAccountFirstName}}