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So I've taken notes and watched the 12HR masterclass and wanted to get some feedback for my first email I plan to send for my niche.

I'm going to A/B test this

Email 1

Subject Line: Quick manufacturing research question

Email Body:

Conducting research on SMB manufacturers, {{firstName}}.

Looking at how 20-50 employee companies handle quote generation as they grow.

{{companyName}} appeared in my google search, guessing it's because you have custom machining capabilities and have been in business for a while now.

Quick question for my research: How fast do you process quotes? 2 hours? same day? next day?

Would you be open to revealing your quote process to me for my research? I would appreciate it. Just let me know and I'll send you the results of the benchmark after I analyze {{companyName}}'s situation.

Harry

Email 1

Subject Line: Custom efficiency analysis for {{companyName}}

Email Body:

Putting something together specifically for {{companyName}}, {{firstName}}.

Been mapping automation opportunities for manufacturers and {{companyName}} popped up when I was on a google search.

Most manufacturers with 5+ employees lose $50K+ annually due to slow quote turnaround, not dealing with leads quickly or following up consistently, but the fix is simple..

Would you be open to me researching {{companyName}}'s specific processes + building a custom automation roadmap showing your biggest opportunities and implementation timeline?

Harry

Feedback is appreciated

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