Am I writing too much for my opt-in? I've seen the other opt-in pages here and it's a lot simplistic, brief and to the point. I'm just a content creator who happened to stumble into the world of daily emailing, so any advice is appreciated :)

So, I've built a new tool that helps you find relevant newsletters in your niche to run ads or do JVs with. I wrote a draft sales page today and I'd love some feedback on it. It's a hefty page so obviously you dont have to read it all if you don't want to. Reading just the lead is perfectly fine. Here's the doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZRg3FI_sPYa8Cel1sss5O9jnZ0JhMjLpbAVZUj0kZ8Q/edit?usp=sharing

Like everybody else in my little corner of the Internet, I'll be doing a list swap with the Growth Tools people some time in the next month. Since I'm all about getting auction partners these days, I pitched Growth Tools something around auctions. We landed on the idea of providing 3 templates for auction offers. In addition to that, Kody Duncan, who is the Director of Partnerships at Growth Tools, is starting a new newsletter, called Roast My Lead Magnet. Kody looks at a lot of lead magnets every day, and in that newsletter he will be sharing what he's learned. He asked if I wanted him to roast my lead magnet in an upcoming issue of his upcoming newsletter. I sheepishly said yes. But before I expose myself to (even more) public ridicule and criticism, maybe I could get your help and feedback? My "auction offer" templates lead magnet is below. If you're game, give me your feedback. Anything goes: - Overall concept and structure - Formatting - Copy - Tone - Missing ideas that would make this more useful - etc. Thanks in advance. Here's the copy: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LlfbpwIdv3mcHHRAay2YibXo8NJfwE7ZlhiazX5Qjdc/edit?usp=sharing

I’d love to get some feedback on my new opt-in page. I’ve created a lead magnet called How To Work Your Way. Inside, there’s six interviews with experts on modern careers and rethinking the rules of work. I’ve published these interviews to my newsletter over the last year. But I realised they could make for a great lead magnet too as the interviews are speaking to my ideal client (professionals who want more choice and freedom at work without having to change career or quit their job). So I’ve bundled them together, added a few pages of my own and got the “okay” from each interviewee to publish the guide. My plan is to run ads in other newsletters to the opt in page and hopefully grab some new subscribers. I think there’s room for improvement on the opt-in page, particularly on: - The six experts are big hitters in my niche. But I’m not sure if the page gets this across and bigs them up enough - The formatting (not my strong point by any stretch) I’m sure there’s lots of other stuff that could be better too. Would you like have a look and let me know what you think? I'd be grateful and don’t hold back if so 😊 https://howtoworkyourway.com

It's a long-ish sales page, so I don't expect granular critique. But if you have a minute or two to skim it and see if anything jumps out, I'd appreciate flagging that. I'm kind of immune to my own shortcomings... so I'd appreciate an extra pair of eyes or two on this. Context: It's a sales page for my writing workshop Write Without AI (the name makes no sense, given that it's an email writing workshop and I'm already aware of that... 'tis what it is... for now). Thanks in advance. https://thesideblogger.com/landing/write-without-ai/