Drop your copy and I will review it in 24h or less. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u_asOMFO2X8IqSkg-5aUDF_AdiGHHaJlcfr-nQNEf9k/edit?usp=drivesdk This is a new one guys review it and rate it for me. https://docs.google.com/document/d/11E0S2eI2AUF10IjmgzIKc7wTj6ZZlVVykX58Gc9xsyo/edit?usp=drivesdk

## The Copy: Here's a practice headline from a 4D Bootcamp student... *Business owners struggling with converting their sales calls* *Learn how thousands of business owners are using the cash closing method to close 70% of their existing leads* *No matter the niche* Time to destroy it... ## The Review: For the first line, it's not terrible, but you always want to use the industry language. Because if they believe you can understand them and they feel understood, then they're also going to believe you have the solution to their problems. And that stems from being relatable to them, which also comes from speaking in their language. So a more specific line would be: *Business owners losing money from low close rates* More the main headline, a few things: - How many thousands of business owners? Can you add a more specific number there so it seems more believable, and so that the proof element is stronger? - You use the word "closing" and "close" in the same sentence. So it is a bit repetitive. - Also, there's a difference between a lead and a call. In this case, you say leads, so I'm gonna assume the solution has to do with that, but just something to be aware of. A slightly better version of this might be: *Learn how 5,700+ business owners (from beginners to 9-figure titans) are converting 70% of their leads with "cash closing."* Now for the final part of the headline, I would add more "even if" objection statements that are also relatable. So like: *No matter the niche, offer, or sales process.* There you go. Weekly reviews are BACK.

Teaching people to go from working whatever dead-end jobs to earning $10k/mth? Just with a phone/laptop and wifi? For free??? That's incredible. Tyson has built one hell of a community. Glad to have found this gem online, and to be a part of it for free. Submit your copies here. I'll review each of them and give you feedback. And don't run away after submitting. Review your peers' copies and give them feedback too. Take inspiration from the good copies. Add them to your swipe file. And for the copies that aren't as good, learn to not make the same mistakes in your own copy.

This is the copy written by me pls review it and share your thoughts and corrections in it THANKYOU! BTW it's a sample copy for my lead And pls rate it out of 1-10 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GhRg-d_KiK35rVMj82BZCx6Me4oGlGa_/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=113327223130663245361&rtpof=true&sd=true You can also follow me on IG for follow back https://www.instagram.com/noman.leads?igsh=MTg5emJmbjlweHV3eQ==

Can someone review my email and give me feedback? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UKU2nYf15sJ48_MAVDVPzhwEN6gEk-lwNkOYWBE6zJE/edit?usp=sharing Thanks