Throw your emails and OBV like the post ;) P.S you can ask questions too + I will also review any landing page/opt-in page etc

Here's the VSL, appreciate it if someone can go through it and leave some thought on how I can improve it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bJp7gJAXoxo91R6mz87lpT6gEe9MXn1sL93m6WMgGQw/edit?usp=sharing Also, drop your copy for a review too!

Hey guys I need your help in this 2 email which email style should I follow, which is better to go with This both email follows HSO email structure. I hope you guys will drop some honest suggestion. 1. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QlUlfbpzyl-7STjBelIePHWmaCGHGbtvdSgKJFpLJ3A/edit?usp=sharing 2. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TePRJvWGgR8M0gqSkVFy4oUlC3qwPEqRkjSJHc7ac4U/edit?usp=sharing

The Copywriting Conundrum: What's Holding You Back? You've just finished your copywriting course, and you're itching to land that dream job... like a horse eager to break out of the gate. But something's missing, and it's like trying to find your way through a dense fog, you can't quite see what's ahead. You're wondering... - Am I really qualified? - What do clients want? - How do I get my foot in the door? The truth is, beginner copywriters face some serious pain points... trying to navigate a minefield blindfolded: - Feeling overwhelmed by the competition, like being a small fish in a big pond. - Struggling to find clients or projects, like searching for a needle in a haystack. - Not knowing what skills to focus on, like trying to solve a puzzle with missig' pieces. The Real Challenge: It's not just about writing... It's easy to think that copywriting is just about writing, but it's not... It's like thinking a chef's job is just about cooking.. there's a whole lotta more going on behind the scenes. It's about: - Communicating effectively with clients and teams, like being a smooth talking diplomat. - Managing projects and deadlines, like herdin' cats, it takes skill and patience. - Closing deals and securing projects, like catching a greased pig, it takes strategy and finesse. Wouldn't you love to have a simple yet effective solution? OK, let me show you a simple solution: Get inside the client's head. So, how do you overcome these challenges? By getting curious, like a cat with a ball of yarn. 1. Read job proposals on freelance platforms.. What are clients looking for? What skills are they prioritizing? 2. Study job postings on job boards.. What are the requirements? What sets the top candidates apart? By doing this, you'll gain clarity on what you need to work on, like a hiker finding their way through the woods with a map. You'll be able to: - Identify the skills you need to develop. - Focus on building a strong foundation, like a builder laying bricks.

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