Hey everyone, i hope you're having a good day or night (depending where you are) i was hoping y'all could rate my outreach game and give me some pointers i welcome all criticism showing y'all this looks embarrassing honestly, but im willing to take the risk

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qf_YCy7DfCA8X4JkbsrJ1a8pD0kVUFaOvoLxv_LOaso/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GUI1QKZdeqGQcICQ8XrazNuZgRsfcqU04A-jUGGMODs/edit?usp=sharing

give me your copy i will make shor to make it better

Looking forward to suggestions of creators. Who according to you are the creators with best email sequences?? It will help me to find out, how a good copy looks like..... I am following @Tyson and reading his emails.... any similar reliable creator???