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Why 90% of copy reviews are keeping you stuck
Kings and Queens, I've been watching this community for months. Same cycle, different people: Write copy → Post for review → Get generic feedback → Write more copy → Still stuck at the same level. Sound familiar? Here's what Tyson4D has been trying to tell us: "Get your copy reviewed and you'll get better." "Reviewing others' copy will skyrocket your skills." He's absolutely right. But here's what 90% of us are getting wrong... We're reviewing copies like we're checking homework, Not like we're studying million-dollar campaigns. When someone drops an email here, most reviews sound like this: - "Good hook, but needs work" - "Try more urgency" - "Add this, add that..." Generic. Surface-level. Forgettable. Meanwhile, the 10% who actually breakthrough are doing something different. They're not just spotting problems—they're reverse-engineering what works. They ask: - "What psychology is this trying to trigger?" - "Why did they choose this structure?" - "How could this convert better?" That's the difference between reviewing to be helpful and reviewing to master the craft. And if you want to hit Tyson's 30-day earning goal, you need reviews that actually move the needle. If you want to make a leap now, I'll review your copy the way top copywriters analyze winning campaigns: - Psychology breakdown - What emotions you're triggering (and which ones you're missing) - Structure analysis - How your flow compares to proven converting templates - Conversion optimization - Specific changes that could double the effectiveness of your copy This isn't "nice headline, try harder" feedback. I want to provide the kind of analysis that actually builds copywriting skills. I can only take 2 copies this week (quality reviews take time, and I'm not cutting corners). Drop your copy below if you want feedback that helps you move forward.
0 likes • Aug 7
@Atharv Garg The fact that you're trying and doing it is commendable. Don't stop now and you'll look back someday with no regrets.
1 like • Aug 7
I appreciate you guys for sending your emails for review. I'm a busy person but don't worry, I'll do my best to review your copies when I'm free
I know.. I fucked up, so I need YOUR wisdom
yo fam, so I had joined this community about a year ago right- I was determined to absolutely OWN THIS SHIT even though I knew it wasn't gonna be easy, and even though I thought I was prepared to take it on, I let myself down. Once school started I and I started playing football I was left on E everyday and so I stopped copywriting. Not for a few weeks, but a YEAR. Now, months of studying just poof, down the drain, cuz when revisiting my notes and shit it feels like a COMPLETE GIBBERISH. How shoud I get back into it? What courses, training tactics, methods and shit would u advice me to start implementing?
1 like • Aug 7
X Lilly I feel all that pain and frustrations you had. But let me be honest with you... You think you accepted that this will gonna be hard. Yet your actions revealed the truth. IT IS NEVER EASY. Unless you let that sink in, that's when you'll ever move forward. You are not lost, you just don't have enough faith in what you're doing. You want immediate results and get frustrated with that little effort you put in. You need to have what it takes for this to work. If this is easy, none of this will ever be worth it. Try to reflect, what are you after? Do you treat copywriting as one sided hustle? Well that should never be the case. Copy existed to help businesses sell. A win-win relationship. If you pursue copywriting for the sake of money, I hate to break it but you won't going to make it. So, what's the next steps? Accept the truth. Watch Tyson's Free copywriting course deliberately. Don't take it for granted(He said it in the intro). Study the relevance of each tips and think how you can use it. Review others copy, you will notice some mistakes and learn from it. At the end of the day, it is YOU vs. YOU alone. Conquer that imposter inside you. Do you want to let years pass by again and let yourself regress? Or embrace the pain and look back successful with no regrets? ...
What one is better?
👉 Question: From @yeeyeeassdurag *For somebody that wants to make money off copywriting Does your 16 hour video offer the same value or even better than your 8 hour video ? (Copywriting wise)” 👉 Answer: They’re both very different, AND important. The 8-hour course focuses heavily on copywriting. The 16-hour course goes deep into copywriting, then how to expand your skillset to scale your income, and later protect your wealth. As well as other paths you can go. The 16-hour course contains 7 wealth creation methods… It’s actually crazy. Let me tell you, it’s not a waste to watch both of them. The 16-hour course doesn’t contain anything taken from the 8-hour… Everything is new and unseen. Given that, what’s the worst that happens if you learn from both? You get even more skills lol. Go and check them both out G. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Xbvl-bbTkg https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OC0nBt3nuDg&t=1049s
0 likes • Aug 6
Can't wait for the 64-hour course
Review my copy & I'll give back something in return
I've been revising this copy every single day in a week now. Yeah that's how perfectionist I am lol. In my own opinion it was a banger copy but I need someone's suggestions or advice to make it even better. Or fix some parts of it and etc. Thanks in ADVANCE! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZK8fA_FecUg743g9wyXJM8N6anQv_BO7zGPdvg0MEzA/edit?usp=drivesdk
2 likes • Aug 6
Hello Troy, Your copy has a good foundation. The Subject line is catchy, Especially the rocket analogy... However, Jumping straight to coaching pitch may not be a good transition. You might want to add the benefit first before hoping on your offer. Try to answer the following: - What specifically makes celebrating bad? - What should the business do instead? - What is the proof that celebrating cost them more than they achieve? With these in mind, you can guide the reader to their next steps You can also use SLs that Tyson use like: " Your celebration cost you millions" Or, for formality "The celebration trap that costs you millions"
1 like • Aug 6
@Troy Dave Amol yes, I'm aware you're indeed a Filipino as well and I hope I helped you a bit:>
Review my copy
This is the copy written by me pls review it and share your thoughts and corrections in it THANKYOU! BTW it's a sample copy for my lead And pls rate it out of 1-10 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bVEz32s2287dSfrqilZS8-bEeuEWiRTL/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=113327223130663245361&rtpof=true&sd=true You can also follow me on IG for follow back https://www.instagram.com/noman.leads?igsh=MTg5emJmbjlweHV3eQ==
1 like • Aug 2
This email is actually great. The headline, the flow, its all good. I'm adding this to my swipefile
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