Hi Danielle, I see two possible issues, 1. The value scale looks rather narrow with few real darks or lights, but maybe more pressing, 2. the colours are mostly cool bluegreens. If you could add some warmer colours, more the yellow/orange/dark sienna range, that would bring more rinterest and this is also possible if the conditions are cloudy and the narrower value scale would fit the scene. I think pushing the warm/cool contrasts might help create more interest.

@Danielle Poisal I think it happens to everyone, these moments where you are just stuck for a moment, before realising you have taken the wrong turn in the maze of possibilities. The greens áre lovely cool greens by the way.

And rightly so, both are very accomplished but the subtle atmosphere in the street scene is excellent! You are becoming ever better! How big is this work actually?

@Robert Reichard I admire how much detail you managed to put in an 8 by 10!

I very much like the vibrancy of your pastel paintings

I really like what you did with the gradients in the sails and in the sky. The sky looks radiant with these turquoises in the lower section.

Lovely, makes me want to go there!