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Query letters
Hello all, I keep reading conflicting views on what should go into a query letter, so wondered what the group thinks. Should the pitch focus on the inciting incident or the plot climax? And what is the right amount of detail?
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From what I've seen it's definitely inciting incident. Plot climax should be saved for the synopsis. Although people say you're not supposed to write a blurb style pitch in your query letter, it really feels like that's exactly what you're supposed to do.
Looking for Beta readers
I'm looking for 2-3 beta readers for my cosy mystery. It's set in the 1920s and is roughly 80,000 words. I've got as far as I can with editing it myself and now I could do with getting some feedback from other writers. If you're interested, please send me a DM. :-)
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@Niki Penzien Very general stuff - are the characters well-rounded, does the plot make sense, does the pace drag in places, and most importantly is it obvious who the murderer is?
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@Danielle Crofts Hi Danielle, that would be great, thanks for offering. Message me your email address and I'll send it over. 🙂
Realism
I’m kind of anti-realism. Imagine how boring police procedurals would be if they were full of actual police work. And I don’t have that much patience with people who are fine with fanciful depictions of every other profession but nitpick about ways in which fictional depictions of their world differ from reality. But things need to feel real. How do we achieve this?
0 likes • 29d
I think there's a line between choosing what to show and someone who hasn't done their research. I'm less forgiving of historical/geographical inaccuracies than ones relating to occupations.
Prologues
Apropos nothing: prologues are very much the fashion, based on what I've seen lately. Do we have any thoughts on this?
0 likes • Jan 11
@Cressida Evans I feel the same but publishers want the drama to happen quickly, so often the only option is to start with it then go backwards.
Anyone ever had to start their end again?
Hello everyone, Not sure whether I'm looking for sympathy or advice, probably both, but I wanted to ask: has anyone else redrafted their WIP about ten times, only to discover the ending is far too complex and doesn't make sense? I've been working on this for years and I seem to remember the end was brilliant. But looking at it with fresh eyes over the Christmas break, I realise the final chapters are too complicated and a bit ridiculous. (You know that feeling when you cringe at your own work?) I'm with you @Lorna Riley when it comes to new ennui, but I was thinking some of you may have experienced this sort of crushing epiphany moment in your own writing lives. If you have, please could you share what you did next? Thanks 👍
1 like • Jan 11
Yes! I had to rewrite mine for similar reasons.
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Charlotte Mansfield
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Living in London and currently editing and re-editing my first novel.

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