May 22 • Blurbs, Tag Lines, and Ad Copy
Blurbity blurb?
I'm thinking my tagline and blurb need a facelift. How does this sound to everyone? Genre: cozy fantasy.
There's a cat on the cover, so I'm debating if I should mention the cat much earlier? In the tagline? Kitty is important to the plot, so....
𝗔𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗰𝗲𝗻𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗶𝗲𝘀 𝗼𝗳 𝘄𝗮𝘁𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘄𝗶𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝗺𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗱𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗵𝗮𝗽𝗽𝗶𝗻𝗲𝘀𝘀, 𝗞𝗮𝗺𝗼𝗱 𝗵𝗮𝘀 𝗹𝗼𝘀𝘁 𝗳𝗮𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝗶𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗺𝗮𝗴𝗶𝗰... 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗼𝘄𝗻 𝗿𝗼𝗮𝗱 𝘁𝗼 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗶𝘀 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝗴𝗶𝗻𝗻𝗶𝗻𝗴.
He might be a genie, but he longs to help people grow in ways magic never has. According to legend, a truly content person could release him from magical servitude forever. So Kamod packs up his caravan and sets off across the rustic countryside of the Blisswile Isles in search of someone genuinely happy.
Unfortunately, there's a catch, and before long, he finds himself tangled in one quirky situation after another alongside a growing circle of friends: a stray orange cat determined to adopt him, a wise goblin monk, a mischievous imp, and a dwarf devoted to rescuing dragons.
Yet the longer Kamod searches for his own happiness, the more hopeless the journey begins to feel. How can he ever be freed when every wish, even a selfless one, begins with the belief that something is needed, broken, or not enough? Although, when we feel most powerless, sometimes wishes come true in unexpected ways.
𝗣𝗲𝗿𝗳𝗲𝗰𝘁 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝘄𝗵𝗼 𝗹𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗺𝘀𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗹 𝗮𝗱𝘃𝗲𝗻𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗲𝘀, 𝗰𝗵𝗼𝘀𝗲𝗻 𝗳𝗮𝗺𝗶𝗹𝘆, 𝗮𝗻𝗶𝗺𝗮𝗹 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗽𝗮𝗻𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗵𝗼𝗽𝗲𝗳𝘂𝗹 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝗶𝗲𝘀 𝗼𝗳 𝗿𝗲𝗱𝗶𝘀𝗰𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗷𝗼𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗽𝘂𝗿𝗽𝗼𝘀𝗲.
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