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New Members - Introduce Yourselves Here!
This is a great, welcoming community. Let us know what your screenwriting journey is that brought you here. What movies you love, where you're from, and what was the moment that made you want to be a writer. You've finally found a place to explore that with other encouraging film lovers. Remember, you don't have to face the blank page alone!
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New Members Coaching Call - Drop your first 7 pages to get coached up Monday at 10 a.m. PST
We have our weekly New Member Coaching Call on Monday: Here's the link for the Zoom. Instead of just getting to know each other, I want to put a couple of you in the Hot Seat and go through the first few pages of your script. Why? Because NOTHING kills a read faster than your first scenes not jumping off the page! It's the #1 Rule in my 10 Iron Clad Rules for a Writing Life. Make me love you by page 2, or gtfo. The truth is, agents/managers/producers will stop reading immediately if you don't nail the opening. And my way of teaching is... I don't believe in simply telling you what to do, since we all have blind spots. The best form of coaching is when I take YOUR work and put you on the Hot Seat and you get real time feedback on how your material plays live. Now... who's in for some coaching? Drop your first 7 pages below. And I'll see you Monday morning. Oh, and make sure to read everyone's work between now and then so you (and they) get the most out of Hot Seat coaching.
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New Members Coaching Call - Drop your first 7 pages to get coached up Monday at 10 a.m. PST
Celebrate!
I believe in gratitude moments. I have gratitude for this community and David Stems hard work. In that vein, I am celebrating 'stage 2' (the script still needs love but...) WE'RE IN PRODUCTION!
Celebrate!
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Good morning from the east coast. I am a mom that likes to scare people or make you laugh. A horror and comedy writer that wants to learn more from experienced screen writers in the industry.
Heya guys. My current treatment.
How is everyone? I hope you’re all well. I thought I’d pop my current treatment in the forum to see if I could possibly get any feedback at all please. ( I am still stuck on exactly how the treatment should physically look on the page. So I have divided it into the three acts. ) - I have read a few online but they all look different 🫣 I know there will still be some bits I need to change and edit, probably cut - But I’m at a point of going in circles. I just want to get the treatment ( outline ) solid, before going on to the first draft script. ( also character descriptions, I have written out in my notes. - not yet added it on to a page as I am not too sure where I add it or what document to add it to or if it’s a separate document 🫣. ) Thank you all so much. :) Hope everyone is having a wonderful day.
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