Lena and Godfrey - Premier Coaching - 3-20-26
Great work people. Another solid Coffee & Coaching in the books. @Lena Lieuvin brought an updated draft of The Power of Dogs — a short told entirely from a dog's POV, with auras that reveal what people are really feeling inside. The read was excellent, Chris and Anna knocked it out of the park, and the feedback was sharp. The room zeroed in on making the auras do more narrative work — not just visual texture, but actually showing us what Amos is hiding from himself, that only the dog can see. And the dog isn't putting up w his bullshit. Not like a cat, who'd be like... eh whatever man. That's the next draft, and I can't wait to see it. Godfrey brought 5 pages from a brand new epic fantasy — swords, kingdoms, dragons, a tyrant king who slices off ears before breakfast. Think Game of Thrones meets Lord of the Rings. Big world, big ambition. The room was fired up, and the conversation went deep into worldbuilding, action clarity, and how to orient your reader inside a massive story. Good stuff. What struck me most today was the participation and the quality of feedback across the board. Everybody was locked in. This is exactly what this community is supposed to be. See you next week. Hit up that Tuesday and Friday thread. And don't forget there's a Cowork session Saturday at 10 and Monday at 10 pacific time. Find those in the calendar and hop on board, standard or premier membership thru the end of the month.