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🚨 ScriptReader Beta is live. First 50 in. Go.
Apple just approved it. This is the moment. Here's what ScriptReader does: it performs your screenplay aloud to you. Your characters. Your dialogue. Your scenes. With distinct voices for every role. You stop reading your script and start hearing it — which means you catch what your eye skips right over. I built this for you. For us. And right now, the beta is open. First 50 people get to try it free. That's it. No waitlist after that. Here's all you do: Step 1 — Download TestFlight. It's Apple's free beta testing app (iOS only — Android coming later.). Takes 30 seconds. → https://apps.apple.com/us/app/testflight/id899247664 Step 2 — Once TestFlight is on your phone, tap this link to join the beta: → https://testflight.apple.com/join/BVXKtFRD You get 30 minutes free. Use every second. Then come back and tell me everything — good, bad, whatever you actually think. That's the deal if you're one of the 50 who downloads. That feedback shapes what this becomes. Also, these 3 questions are hugely important: 1. Did it work? Could you get your script in and hear it play back without hitting a wall? Yes or no — and if no, where did it break? 2. What surprised you? Good or bad. What did you learn about your script? 3. Would you pay for this? Based on what this cost me, I cannot give this away for free. So if yes, what's a fair monthly price? The link is live. The clock is running. Don't download unless you're committed to giving feedback. If you are, comment: 🔥 below. And let's get to work! Go. 🎬 Edit: there are def some spacing issues with how it differentiates between characters and action. They sometimes run together. This is something I’m addressing in the next build. This build is more about… does it work at all. And don’t forget to try the Forge Analysis and see how that reads.
🚨 ScriptReader Beta is live. First 50 in. Go.
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🔥 Forge Analysis — HFN 5-Easy-Pieces (edited) By J. David Stem · The Primal Forge THE WOUND The protagonist, DH, carries the wound of feeling unseen and undervalued. His need to be recognized and appreciated has been unmet, leading to a deep-seated sense of inadequacy. This is hinted at through his attempts to charm and joke with the waitress and his friends, coupled with a certain restlessness and dissatisfaction. THE LIE DH's lie is the belief that he must perform and entertain to earn love and respect. He deflects with humor and plays the role of the likable rogue, masking his fear that his true self isn't enough. THE TRUTH The truth that has the potential to dismantle DH's lie is the realization that genuine connection doesn't require performance or pretense. It's about vulnerability and allowing others to see beyond the facade. This truth is gently suggested through Jugy's quiet presence and the moments when DH's defenses drop, revealing glimpses of authenticity. IS THE STORY APPLYING HEAT? The plot circles around DH's wound but doesn't press deeply into it. The scenes are rich with character interactions that hint at deeper issues but often retreat into humor and chaos, avoiding direct confrontation with DH's core pain. YOUR QUESTION How can you bring DH face-to-face with a moment of raw vulnerability, forcing him to confront his belief that he must perform to be loved?
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@David Stem I had not problems with my opening scene BUT It did not parse out my 5 easy pieces characters… It read everything as the narrator— I think I found a work around. Also, it did load properly into Tablereads App (which is a horrible app voice wise btw)
Tuesday and Friday Premium Coaching Calls
Another week is about to start. Please get your pages and casting up on the link. Make sure you either place your pages on March 17 for Tuesday or March 20th for Friday on the program link above. Screenwriting is hard. You have to be very courageous to put yourself out there and be willing to accept that your pages will need to be rewritten, revised, and sometimes torn to shreds in the process of making something great. To paraphrase our fearless leader, David Stem, the magic happens when writers stop protecting drafts and start refining them in real time and revealing all of themselves to other writers. Here's the link for the TUESDAY Premium Coaching Call ====================================== Here's the link for the FRIDAY Premium Coaching Call
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Great work @Godfrey Virgile And @Lena Lieuvin so cool to follow you guys on your journey! :)
On Primal Forge GPT 🔥
This AI scriptwriting tool being included in the Premium membership (along with access to live workshop recordings and a couple other modules) is a huge plus. Over the weekend, I asked P F GPT questions like: “Can you give me an exercise to help refine my logline?” “What type of plot points am I allowed to reveal without spoiling the story to other writers who review my work?” “Do you also go by the name Forgie?” Each time, Forgie gave me thorough answers—The Writer’s Forge style. I do think that the GPT is promising in that it generates templates, provides examples, and ends each response with a question/prompt. This leaves the interaction open-ended, actionable, and potentially perpetual. In terms of feeding Forgie my logline or script for review, I’m a bit hesitant because I really don’t know what the cons are (if there are any). So I’d love to hear anyone’s thought process and/or experience re: sharing their work with the GPT or scriptwriting-specific AI platforms! 🙏
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@Chris Dyer has some good recommendations about protecting your data! I’m trying to remember exactly… I used Perplexity ai to recommend…
I'm speaking at a screenwriting conference this weekend. If you want tix, hmm below.
I'm one of the keynote speakers at Allegory Live. I'm going to be taking the Wound, The Lie and The Small life that I teach in workshops here. If you'd like to attend, one of our members who put this together has made a couple of tickets available. HMU here or DM me if you'd like to come. First come first serve. Thx. D
I'm speaking at a screenwriting conference this weekend. If you want tix, hmm below.
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anyone want to car pool from Santa Monica let me know
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David Hinnebusch
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