A fragment - would love to hear your thoughts

This post was inspired by

' question about:

The attached fragment is from a novel I have written called Patient One: The First Threshold.

For days I had been wrestling with one character's backstory, trying to understand who she was

and what had shaped her.

Then another character quietly stepped onto the page and, in effect, told me to sit down.

What followed wasn't planned.

I simply listened and wrote.

Looking back, this may have been one of the moments the story truly started making sense to me.

I'd be curious to hear what resonates, what doesn't, and what questions it leaves you with.

Thank you for reading.

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A fragment - would love to hear your thoughts

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