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Me… the series. Blessed me.
Just another feel good vibe of reflection of ourselves and creative mind setting. Now breathe… Me… the series. NS042026KW Blessed me. Given so many chances Not taken fore granted. Accepted me starts by planting. A garden of seeds. In fertile conditions and The soil free of weeds. The me who farms the land. My investment to fulfill my needs. Having the mindset for my plans. Connecting with my soulful me. Aligned with the master hands. To guide me through life and, The times in the sands. Where my future belongs to me. And I’m blessed with the love, A higher power and direction. Of myself and inner inspection. That leadership in belief, Gives me food for action. So I can find my passion. Achievement in the strategy. The player who has the lead. The focused me who clearly sees, The value and effectiveness Of being the one connected. To the one who’s me, being blessed. K. (A random share. Happy ✍🏽)
A metamorphosis. ❤️
🌙 Momentum Check
Let’s do a reflective look at our week! Did you: 👀 Show up? 👀 Get clearer? 👀 Move forward, even a little? That’s how books are built. 📚 👉 What’s one thing you’re carrying into next week? Share it in the comments!
🌙 Momentum Check
Really got back into finish my original first novel - brain organised, chapters organised and now reading through for spelling/grammatical errors! 🤞📝🤞
🛑 The Restart Cycle Ends Here
If you’ve restarted your book more than twice… It’s not a motivation problem. It’s a clarity problem. Think about it, you can have a heck of a lot of motivation, but if you don’t have the direction, how are you getting there? Many famous authors have a structure at the beginning to help guide them on their path. 💥Dan Brown: Employs detailed outlines that include research, character motivations, and specific plot points to create high-stakes, suspenseful narratives. 💥George R.R. Martin: Uses extensive planning to manage intricate storylines and world-building, which ensures his complex plots maintain direction (think of the books he has completed from this. It has come to my attention that he has fallen off of consistency since readers are still waiting for his new book. This shows us that everyone can have times where they lose their direction.). 👉 What part of your story keeps changing every time you restart? Share your answer in the comments. That’s the piece we lock in first and helps us understand the hole you have within your story. Book a time for us to chat, and let’s find a solution together.
🛑 The Restart Cycle Ends Here
I find it's not motivation with me, it's an over-active storyline creator - I come up with another storyline idea that I just have to put on paper, so to speak - if I don't then it can melt away never to be recaptured. Then, and only then can I settle back onto the original story! 🤷🤦
@Dani Rosenblad James - more like, distracting to the brain. Takes you away so it takes time to get back into the flow if the original story.
Dialogue That Sounds Real
Many writers accidentally make dialogue sound stiff or unnatural. Today we’re practicing natural conversation. 🔥Your Challenge Write a short conversation between two characters where: • one character wants something • the other character is hiding something But neither of them says it directly. Think of how real people talk. 🗣️ We often: • avoid the real topic • speak indirectly • say one thing but mean another Example: Person A: “Did you go to the meeting yesterday?” Person B: “I had a lot going on.” The tension sits between the lines. Rules 🔥 Write at least 10 lines of dialogue 🔥 Use minimal description 🔥 Let the tension show through conversation Bonus Challenge Add one small physical action that reveals what the character is feeling.
Dialogue That Sounds Real
“Yes, I did receive what I was expecting” Muriel stated as she quickly hid it in her reticule, out of sight. “So, what did it say?” Demanded Clara. “Just the usual, arrived safely, you know.” was Muriel's nonchalant reply, as she sipped her tea. “Oh! What, nothing about when he's returning?” “His sister did not mention anything.” “So, what was in it, she must have mentioned something about his arrival and how long he's staying?” “Well, just that he's arrived.” “But there must be more. Take another look “ Clara said, as she tried to grasp the reticule, Muriel pulled it out of her reach. “I don't need to, I told you what it said.” “I cannot believe Catherine did not tell you more. Will he return in time?” “She did not say, so I cannot enlighten you.”
🛠️ Your Book Is Asking Something of You
Not just your time. It’s asking for your honesty. Your attention. Your willingness to not run when it gets uncomfortable. Think about this for a moment. There’s something that our stories want from us more than time. This could be self-reflection, thinking as your ideal reader, understanding what is needed in the story, and many other things that play a role within a book. 📕 When I teach Story First, it helps you find your path within your book and it helps lighten the load further down the process. Now, I want you to ask yourself this question and then write your response in the comments below! 👇 👉 What is your story asking from you right now? Answer that… and you’ll know your next step.
🛠️ Your Book Is Asking Something of You
Thanks to the lovely feedback I received from @Karen Dennis , I am now motivated to complete my first story about 'Audrey' - I spend at least two hours each day, but sometimes longer. It is finally I'm getting there and I am feeling much happier to work through it to the end. The chapters are clicking in nicely, with a few grammatic tweeaks too! Feeling relieved that I'm accomplishing what I'd set out for my 70th year!
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Novelist - I love history, so historical romance is my genre, Jane Austen my inspiration, plus 50 years a beauty & aesthetic spa therapist/educator.

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