Anyone please review this [ Practice ] Facebook ad for baby floats.

This is the second copy I wrote. I know that there would be unnecessary information or over education. There is language barrier as well. I might didn't comply with principals of persuasion as well in the copy. But I wrote this to get criticism from experts and get better. I need your guidance and advices! I'm thanking you in advance for your precious time and guidance.

Here's the link to docs : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DXhDjzsOtjBllNjAfSshfYULHJjqcO6APWBuLzIqudI/edit?usp=drivesdk

2 comments