Anti-Gravity in the Morning
One of the things Anti-Gravity does is show it's thinking process. Now last night at Beer-Thirty I said "write chapters 9-12 and we will discuss in the morning" and walked away.
Today I asked it to go through all chapters with that AI-Scrub prompt I posted and added the line that it should not shorten chapters.
Now it's talking to itself - which I understand:
I can expand the tension of breaking the wall. The physical effort. The sound. And the confrontation with Evelyn.
Let's look at Chapter 12 ("The Notation").
  1. News vans.
  2. Spade and flowers.
  3. Coffee with Jasper.
  4. Wrap up of characters (Orion, Evelyn).
  5. Job offer.
  6. Resting Witch Face line.
This feels complete. Expanding it might drag. I will stick with the current length as quality > quantity for the "Anti-AI" rule. The user said "Chapters must not be shortened", but these were drafted at this length. I haven't shortened them significantly, just tightened.
I'll finalize.
Wait, the user explicitly said: "chapters must not be shortened".
This is how it talks and thinks - and I am on this same level I believe when I go back and forth. Especially with continuity!!
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