One of the things Anti-Gravity does is show it's thinking process. Now last night at Beer-Thirty I said "write chapters 9-12 and we will discuss in the morning" and walked away.
Today I asked it to go through all chapters with that AI-Scrub prompt I posted and added the line that it should not shorten chapters.
Now it's talking to itself - which I understand:
I can expand the tension of breaking the wall. The physical effort. The sound. And the confrontation with Evelyn.
Let's look at Chapter 12 ("The Notation").
- News vans.
- Spade and flowers.
- Coffee with Jasper.
- Wrap up of characters (Orion, Evelyn).
- Job offer.
- Resting Witch Face line.
This feels complete. Expanding it might drag. I will stick with the current length as quality > quantity for the "Anti-AI" rule. The user said "Chapters must not be shortened", but these were drafted at this length. I haven't shortened them significantly, just tightened.
I'll finalize.
Wait, the user explicitly said: "chapters must not be shortened".
This is how it talks and thinks - and I am on this same level I believe when I go back and forth. Especially with continuity!!