This is initial DM I'm using currently
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Hey [Name]! 👋
I was checking out [Business Name]
Quick question — are you still handling [bookings / customer inquiries / follow-ups] manually? I help local businesses like yours automate that so you stop losing leads and save 5–10 hrs a week.
Would it be cool if I showed you exactly how it'd work for your business? No cost, just a quick 15-min chat.
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It's not working at least didn't till now
Can you teach me how to reframe this or what to tweak in it???