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Honestly man, it feels like you're trying to lecture him and convince at the same time. And when you're trying to land a client for the first time, that's probably not the wisest way to go. Here's an example of one of my structured email outreaches: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12NuvW8E9uCTTyO4UK3EQI6aNCXrCUiECPWBvmSfC6GU/edit?usp=sharing Obviously, never copy word for word but you may get a glimpse of inspiration.

Either reach them through a different channel (Fb, LinkedIn, email) or lead with a funny meme that breaks the ice and gives them a reason to respond to you. Then, I guess you could ask for permission to send over the value. Though I'd suggest you've had a couple of back and forths initially, before sending anything. Cause the method with free value up front seems to be overplayed and prospects start catching up on it..

Couple of issues here...Firstly, it seems you're not sending messages to qualified prospects. Out of the 4 I saw, only the first one appears to be qualified and the third one (somewhat). Secondly, the way you structure your outreach is false and won't be doing you any favors, because you sound like the majority of people that hit their DMs every day. It seems to me like you're either A) asking for permission, B) trying to bait them to respond by saying "your brand/business is losing potential" or C) begging for work, with which you instantly lose leverage and you put yourself as the inferior in any given situation. So you want to appear higher status, but you need to act like it. When it comes to your first message with a prospect, you don't have to necessarily let them know there's something wrong with their business, or point out where they're leaking or losing out on potential...and as if that weren't enough, popping out of nowhere - claiming you can fix it, without any authority, proof of results or value up front. You have to give them a reason to trust you first! Next time, simply engage with their posts and stories, write something insightful, compliment what they're doing right and then hit them up by delivering something tangible up front they could use as value offer.

@Hussain Haider Good luck! 🤙

Well, did you try reaching out to the admins themselves through email? You can also shoot a message to @Tyson FourDee @Jasper Clark in Skool as well and explain your issue, maybe they might be able to help you with that and guide you.