I have implemented changes per Sam's critique. I lightened shadows in the back two-three mountains, toned down the yellow/ochre in the biggest mountain, lightened the back ridge, and lightened the sky. I also put some desaturated greens and such at the base of the concave back ridge, varied the pines on the left, and monkeyed with the snow areas. I also restated shadows in the tre-filled hill closest us. Left is update. Right is previous. Water is untouched. Any tint differences are due to lighting variance.

oil on canvas, 12 X 16

Any thoughts about composition? Please, do not judge values, it's not easy to get correct ones with an HB pencil and small piece of charcoal 😉

Another Sunday, another attempt at still life

Experimenting with painting some figures.