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Marlowe and Christie Writers

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Welcome and First Paragraph Feedback
Hello Marlowe and Christie Writers! It's amazing to have you here. Please share the opening paragraph of your WIP to receive feedback here.
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Opening para (from prelude) of my draft novel: It’s remarkably leafy for a city centre location, it has a very definite affluent feel and it seems, well, awfully quiet - but it is late evening after all, supposed Viggo - he’s the fatter one who doesn’t breathe so well. Their vehicle pulls up hard, it’s fine for them to double-park, this is, let’s face it, an emergency. Almost simultaneously, the two figures jump out…
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Neil Waterman
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@neil-waterman-6581
Retired PI lawyer, debut novel (literary fiction/psychological thriller) currently in editing stage. Member of local literary critiquing group

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Joined Dec 13, 2025
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