Drop your banger copies. I and other community members will review them. Till then, Peace.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L-dc3D8tEfLbh8xIGvWCvg_X4cqPH4l0OLKPtYlAP7Y/edit?usp=sharing If someone can review this i would appreciate it

Hey, I have created a new IG for my copywriting clients to see as my business card. I have made 2 posts there. Can you take a moment and critique them based on your opinion? Leave an interaction if you like. Your insights and reviews are appreciated. https://www.instagram.com/copydriver/

Stop writing invisible headlines that get ignored, like a "Hey" text to your crush. If you’re just "introducing a topic," you’ve already lost. In an attention economy, you aren't competing with other creators; You're competing with a biological urge to swipe away. To get the click, you have to stop being a polite writer and start being a psychological architect. The truth? "Standard" hooks are dead. To get the click today, you have to stop being a polite writer and start being a psychological architect. Here is what actually makes a hook "banger." status: 1) Primal & Emotional: The most powerful hooks tap into human nature, specifically the desire to avoid pain or gain pleasure. Interestingly, people will do more to avoid pain than to gain pleasure. 2) The "Wait, What?" Factor: A great hook creates an immediate "open loop" in the brain. It makes the reader stop and think, "I have to see what this is about." 3) Status-Driven: It doesn't just promise a benefit; it promises a change in status. It addresses how you will be perceived by your "self, friends, and enemies." 4) High Relevancy: It connects to a current event, a trending topic, or a specific problem the audience is experiencing right now. 5) Click-Worthy, Not Click-Bait: A real hook leads to actual value (education, inspiration, or entertainment). Clickbait is misleading; a hook is a promise that you actually fulfill. What’s the best (or worst) hook you’ve seen this week? Drop it below and let’s roast/toast it.

Hey there, I have created a piece of content on my new IG. I want to establish this account as my business card. Would you be kind enough to view and rate it? Suggest anything that needs improvement. Any suggestions are appreciated. https://www.instagram.com/p/DUsuGx-CKYL/?img_index=1