Another ad for feedback š
Hey everyone, posting another ad for feedback. Tried to apply what I learned from the last round. Hope it's one step closer to 'not being a sucky copy' š«£ Avatar: Woman, 35-55, burned by eye creams and serums, not considering fillers, deeply skeptical of beauty industry. Her dark circles are NOT genetic. Awareness: Problem aware/Solution aware/solution cynical Angle: āWrong problem.ā Beauty industryās been treating pigment. The real issue is the leaky capillaries beneath thin undereye skin. Thatās why nothing worked. The 2-step protocol is the only thing targeting the actual cause. Hook: I spent $1000 on eye creams that never work, weāve been treating it all wrong. Body: I used to have a 7-step routine just for my dark under eyes. Cucumbers, cold spoons, ice rollers, tea bags⦠Nothing worked. Spent over $1,000 on retinol creams, vitamin C serums, peptides, and every dermatologist recommended brand that I could find. But my dark circles? They got worse because the actives destroyed my skin barrier. So I went to the professionals⦠The aestheticians told me to āget more sleepā and ādrink more waterā as if I hadnāt tried that for years. And their other suggestion? Get a $1500 filler injection thatād migrate into my cheeks and would need to be corrected within months. I was exhausted from looking exhausted. Then the fifth dermatologist I saw told me something that made me furious at every product I ever bought. She said, āYour dark circles arenāt a pigment problem. Theyāre a vascular problem.ā Hereās what that means: The skin underneath your eyes is the thinnest on your entire face. When it gets compromised by harsh irritants, the tiny capillaries beneath the surface can become inflamed. These blood vessels get bigger, and thatās the dark color you see under your eyes. This color sits deeper than any cream can reach. Thatās why nothing that youāve put on your face has worked. You canāt fix the vascular problem from the outside. The entire eye care industry has been solving the wrong problem.