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Writing Prompt
Quick 5-minute writing spark:Your reflection in the mirror stops copying you. Instead, it starts telling you the one secret you've been hiding from everyone—even yourself. What does it say? Write the first line of dialogue (or the whole short exchange) below.
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“OK, listen up. I’ve deactivated the switches, but you’ve only got a minute or so until they cotton on. I can’t go on anymore with the shame. We’ve recorded everything. The weekly bit on the side with that blonde chick in London? We know every sordid detail. The late-night gambling sessions with the huge debts? We’ve got that too. And she’s gonna get her revenge. She’s got a gun. So, deep breath! Save yourself and get out!”
Silly grammar question?
Hi everyone! I had a conversation with one of my alpha readers (aka critique partner) around a sentence from my novel. Please see below. "I’m tidying up the last things before heading out. One final look at my inbox, then I grab the trench coat, and switch off the Sonos." According to my alpha reader, grabbing "the" trench coat is not grammatically correct, and the sentence should read "I grab my trench coat." Not having defined the trench coat or not having given enough context doesn't warrant the use of a definite article. Basically, we don't know anything about it, so it cannot be called THE trench coat. If, for example, I'd said "I look for something warm in the wardrobe. I grab the trench coat and leave", that would have worked, because we are already in the realm of clothing and the character is looking into a wardrobe. Now, I can totally see where this is coming from, but to me it feels there's enough context? And I struggle to see how it becomes a plain grammar mistake. The character is clearly heading out, and performs a number of actions typical of who gets ready to leave the office, including grabbing a coat that can just assume is his. I do trust my alpha reader, who is a linguist and a translator, but I wonder whether the precise, academic grammar might have got in the way of what we can and cannot say in fiction? Or I am simply plain wrong, which is equally fine, but I'd like to know why :D What do you think? P.S. I know this is an easy fix and not a biggie at all. At this point, it's mostly an intellectual curiosity for me :)
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One other thing about the snippet you quoted. It begins with “I’m tidying up …”, present continuous tense, but then switches to the present simple “… then I grab …”. Maybe it is out of context and there is a logical explanation, but that also caused me to falter.
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@Gabby Martini I think English is the only major language which doesn’t have some officials overseeing the language and deciding what is allowed and what is not. This is a good thing, I believe, but it leaves many grey areas. For novelists (think of Joyce) it can be a good thing, but, alas, the reader has the final say on whether our experiments or idiosyncrasies with English work.
Getting it Done
What’s the one thing stopping you from finishing your current WIP right now? Procrastination? Perfectionism? That endless research rabbit hole? We are have something - share yours below.
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I just went to see the film ‘Modi - 3 days on the wing of madness’ which (I think) hinges on coming to terms with the value of artistic output. Conversely, it is only when he dissociates himself from the valuation of his sculpture and decides to work for his own self-satisfaction that he begins to flourish. Easier said than done, I know, but overcoming the fear of public rejection is a major step.
Implausible or not what’s the truth?
A question for you guys: How plausible does a high concept thriller need to be? ALL Dan Browns books cross the line and are not speculative? So are many other best sellers. Does Gone Girl have an improbable plot? Is Girl on a train is far fetched and highly coincidental? And, Where the Crawdads Sing…I mean, really? But it works great doesn’t it?! So is it ok the cross the line a bit with an exciting plot? And does the reader care? I’m asking for a friend!!!
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Everyone has their threshold, but readers tend to forgive lack of plausibility if it is a good read. I mainly ‘read’ audiobooks and I probably give up on about half, not because they weren’t plausible, but the narrative became turgid or laboured.
Warm-up routines
I wonder if others have specific routines to get in the right frame of mind for writing. I have drill books used by junior children for learning and memorising Chinese characters and idioms. Fifteen minutes or so usually does the trick for a couple of hours writing.
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@Juno Baker I live in Japan where the writing system is extremely complicated (children cannot read a newspaper until around eleven). I basically sit down for about twenty minutes writing characters in these drill test books. I like to think that I’m freeing up the creative left side of my brain, but that it is fanciful.
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@Juno Baker I am way more productive early in the morning compared to late at night.
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After graduating from Warwick University, a career in publishing awaited, plans which were scuppered by a blind date with a Japanese exchange student.

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