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Update on the call of yesterday
Guys, I closed him. It’s 1k / month for 15 IG reels + 12 emails, and we signed for 3 months. He says he’s got more work for the near future so we’ll negotiate again that price, but I’m amped up. @Alicia Joseph Your tip turned out good 🙌
1 like • Apr 13
@Muhammad Affan Thanks !
0 likes • Apr 13
@Suzette Polack thank youuu!
What you guys up to?
Good afternoon guys :) Currently 2:04 for me right now, I'm currently working on market research for one of my clients new offers and another new offer. Gonna crush it 🔥 What are you guys working on right now?
2 likes • Mar 18
@Alicia Joseph I’ll keep that in mind thank you I appreciate the advice !
1 like • Mar 19
@Alicia Joseph Closed him, we got work for the next 3 months & more to come ! 🙌
An info product for an SMMA content creator
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ugHYyGxeYTJUtZeJDF-PNyuUmJJsS_HYPpLYYXI2MPE/edit?usp=sharing Be harsh with corrections. I'm in this to get better
1 like • Mar 13
@Joshua Olasoji In my opinion yes, but the body works too. Maybe just making it more « obvious » if it makes sense? Cause I feel like there’s a jump between the text and your CTA, needs just a bit more flow leading to it !
0 likes • Mar 13
@Joshua Olasoji Just my style through, don’t read into it too much it’s a great copy overall :)
Could you all give me some feedback on my work 😅
Hello everyone, this is my first copywriting piece. I felt quite lost and spent a lot of time just trying to choose a topic to practice :(( I’d really appreciate it if you could take a moment to review my work and share your feedback. Thank you 🥰 https://docs.google.com/document/d/12o-8BOppsXFX0UDJoKBTacFCFl31KyZV7tsDThpyjsc/edit?usp=sharing
1 like • Mar 10
It's pretty good. I'd use fewer exclamation points; it feels a little bit forced. I'd talk a bit more about how the inconviences you listed in the beginning make them feel (tired and out of resources, lost & don't know what to do - emotions). The same thing goes for the offer: make the feeling stand out a little bit more instead of listing features. The CTA is pretty good. PS: I'm no expert, so don't take this too hard :)
1 like • Mar 10
@Tran Hoang No problem ! You got good foundation so I’m sure you’ll master the skill in no time, keep it up !
Probably the worst e-mail you'll read tbh
At least, I hope it's not. It's a practice copy. Here are the details, @Alicia Joseph : - Welcome flow (First e-mail after the sign-up form; that's why there's no CTA; we're aiming for building connection & credibility) - Fitness & mindset coach - Avatar: 16 - 28yo, mostly men, Canadian. - Pain points: out of shape, shitty mindset & vision of life/work, no guidance to better themselves - Offer: Fitness coaching (meal plans, workout plans, weekly meeting to change beliefs system) Let me know what you guys think. Here's the link.
1 like • Mar 10
@Moosa Tariq I know that, if she wants to ignore the post for that it’s fine «bruh »
0 likes • Mar 10
@Alicia Joseph Hey Alicia:) Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it ! Still trying to find my way and system to optimize my copy, but I’ll make sure to go more in depth on the audience research. Appreciate it:) !
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Camille Laliberté
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@camille-laliberte-3551
Copywriter who always loved to write.

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Joined Feb 13, 2025
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