Could you all give me some feedback on my work 😅

Hello everyone, this is my first copywriting piece. I felt quite lost and spent a lot of time just trying to choose a topic to practice :(( I’d really appreciate it if you could take a moment to review my work and share your feedback. Thank you 🥰

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12o-8BOppsXFX0UDJoKBTacFCFl31KyZV7tsDThpyjsc/edit?usp=sharing

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