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Scriptment notes needed

I've been working on something for the past few months.

It's a feature film, in a post apocalyptic Paris.

Here's the logline:

“An independent and distrustful survivor of extreme global warming must choose between helping the authoritarian regime or rebel against it to save her dog and join the colony on Mars."

I haven't written a proper script yet, but I have the beginning of a scriptment, as I find this is what helps me best organize the story and start rolling it out.

So far I have written Act 1. I'm aiming to get the full scriptment finished by the end of the week.

Reason why I'm going so fast is because next week, I will be working on this project with professional producers and distributors, and I need to have a version done for this.

I'm writing in French so I used Deepl to translate it quickly and get it to you so I could have notes before then. I hate using Deepl so i'm very sorry in advance for anything that doesn't really make sense in English or if some sentences are poorly written. It's really because I'm running out of time on this.

If you could have a read and send me notes that would be absolutely amazing.

Thank you beautiful people!

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