I see lots of artists doing the same things and a lot of them don’t work. The problem I have however is how do I apply story marketing. There’s a story of why I created the painting, and story of the process. I feel like what I’m missing is something that draws attention. I also feel like if I make the story too long people will tune out. Here’s an example that is clearly ineffective. 🌸Persephone🌸 Step into Greek mythology with Coralie’s original artwork, capturing Persephone among the narcissus flowers. Original Painting - $360 Fine art print - $20 Bring a timeless myth into your home. https://www.coraliesbrushartetc.org/

Here are the edited creatives. I'm thinking short copy like: Ditch the doubt and discover what confidence really feels like. In just one day, you’ll let go of perfectionism, find the fun in your rides again, and unlock the freedom you and your horse have been waiting for. Save Your Spot Now

Here is my attempt at a creative for the quiz lead magnet I have.