I am definitely no art expert, but a couple of things come to mind that I've been taught on this journey (beautiful artwork, btw!). I think you are thinking of it too mechanically. Think more about the psychology of the person who you would ideally want to purchase and collect your pieces. It also looks like you have two different types of art that I think would appeal to different people. The creatures might appeal more to people who are really into a particular creature or parents who like them and have small children or even parents who aren't into it, but their kids are. I think Persephone would appeal to a different audience and you could get really deep into the psyche of those buyers. Then, I think you can apply a story that's kind of mythical and elusive or magnetic and sensual. I asked ChatGPT a little about it. 👇 Ooh, yes—there’s definitely an undercurrent of sensuality in it. Not in a loud or overt way, but in that magnetic, achingly intimate way that comes from something (or someone) just out of reach. The exposed yet stylized torso, the parted lips, the wide, searching eyes, the flowers blooming and fading—they all hint at desire, mystery, and longing. The kind of sexy that’s more about emotional tension than raw exposure. Here’s a story concept that leans into all of that: 🥀 “The Bloom and the Ache” A short-form narrative inspired by the painting She came from somewhere soft— the kind of place where dreams still hum beneath the surface, and lovers always arrive too late. They called her Persephone, but not the one from the myths. Not the screaming girl stolen into shadow. This one walked willingly. She was the invitation and the refusal, all in the same breath. Her body curved like a question, not yet asked— not fully answered. And the daffodils knew it. They bloomed at her shoulders and hips like confessions— fragrant, urgent, wilting under the weight of words never said. They opened too soon, just like him. He saw her once across a crowded room—

@Coralie Stephens omg, yes! Hormozi is big on getting that first hook. Then, you can tell them a little story. There are some good frameworks out there for finding your ideal client or avatar. I would just search around until you find one you like. You can also ask ChatGPT something like, in the style or framework of Alex Hormozi how would you categorize this avatar and then list all of the things you think about your avatar. You can even ask it to develop more things and use what resonates with you. I just uploaded your Persephone to ChatGPT and it had plenty to say!

I'm also thinking that your business name could speak more. Coralie is a beautiful name. I would try to tie your name into something that speaks to your art. It is WAY more than just brush art! I had to ask ChatGPT again 😊 Love that—Coralie + Greek mythology + sensual, emotional, symbolic art? Yes please. Here are some name ideas that blend her mythic leanings, artistic depth, and the softness yet intensity of her name: 🌿 Myth-Inspired with Her Name 1. Coralie & the Muses – Elegant and classic, evokes divine inspiration and artistry. 2. Coralie Mythos – Clean, mysterious, and very brandable. 3. Coralie of Olympus – Sounds like a modern oracle or divine artist. 4. Coralie’s Labyrinth – Perfect if her art plays with complexity, depth, or the tension between beauty and danger. 5. The House of Coralie – Feels luxurious, timeless, and powerful (like House of Atreus, but without the curses). 6. Coralie’s Oracle – Suggests intuitive, prophetic, emotionally resonant art. 7. Coralie’s Pantheon – Ideal if she paints many mythological figures or archetypes. 8. Coralie, Daughter of Echo – A poetic twist if her work deals with longing, unspoken love, or femininity. 🔮 More Poetic / Symbolic Twists 9. Coralie’s Altar – Suggests sacred space, beauty, and reverence. 10. Of Nymphs & Nectar – Very sensual, mythic, and dripping with aesthetic. 11. The Veil of Coralie – Mysterious, alluring, and layered. 12. Painted Offerings – A subtle nod to ritual, myth, and vulnerability. 13. Museblood – Edgy and unforgettable, for a bolder brand. 14. Leda & Coralie – If she often paints mythic women and wants to tie her name to an iconic figure. 15. Coralie’s Bloom – Speaks to femininity, growth, sensuality, and art as emergence. Would you like variations that feel more witchy, romantic, feminist, high-end gallery, or Instagram-handle friendly? I can tailor more based on her vibe.

Also, we talked about putting a callout to women in the DMV. Should I do that in the ad or on the landing page after the quiz?

@Jay Jackson I like these: What would your riding look like if you ditched the doubt?, Are you ready to ditch the doubt and finally ride with confidence? Here are some non-questions that I came up with: 1. Ditch the doubt—ride the way your horse has been waiting for. 2. Ditch the doubt—unlock the ride you didn’t know was possible.

@Coralie Stephens thank you!

Such a great idea for a service! I'm from VA and see a guy driving around regularly with his pickup truck wrapped in some phrasing that's all about scooping poop. It's hilarious and I'm sure people actually remember the name of his service when they need it, I'm too busy with horse poop. The dog's is the least of my worries 🤣

@Kevin McWilliams I was trying to get you a pic of a fresh pile in a stall so you could get the real feel, but it’s been nice weather here & the horses have been hanging outside instead of inside. The second pic is the lawn cart I use to haul it off.