I have a question about target audience. I paint mostly based on myths and creatures, so my audience I have come up with is art collectors, people who like mythology, and art decor. Is there anything that I am missing?

I see lots of artists doing the same things and a lot of them don’t work. The problem I have however is how do I apply story marketing. There’s a story of why I created the painting, and story of the process. I feel like what I’m missing is something that draws attention. I also feel like if I make the story too long people will tune out. Here’s an example that is clearly ineffective. 🌸Persephone🌸 Step into Greek mythology with Coralie’s original artwork, capturing Persephone among the narcissus flowers. Original Painting - $360 Fine art print - $20 Bring a timeless myth into your home. https://www.coraliesbrushartetc.org/

My name is Coralie and I’m an artist who does who also does commission work.

Here is my attempt at a creative for the quiz lead magnet I have.