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Rate my Cold Email Script

Subject: Prospect Name & Sameer/ Prospect Name - Sameer

Copy:

Hey {{firstName}},

We can help you add $10,000 to your monthly revenue in 180 days, booking a minimum of 20+ qualified appointments, utilizing our efficient systems. If for some reason we don't meet this commitment, you won't have to pay and will receive 2 months of our work for free — that's our guarantee.

I send these emails personally, not through bulk software (I know you get plenty of automated messages each week). To make it more personal, I recorded a quick video explaining everything.

(Video)

Let me know if you want more info, happy to send something over :)

Best,

Sameer

PS - {{ps_statement}}

PPS - By the way, your LinkedIn headline is fantastic! Was it "{{linkedin_headline}}"?

An Example:

Subject: Nitin & Sameer

Copy:

Hey Nitin,

Came across your profile and your work with AI-driven ad strategies at Quickads caught my attention - thought you might be interested in this.

I send these emails personally, not through bulk software (I know you get plenty of automated messages each week). To make it more personal, I recorded a quick video explaining everything.

(Personalised video with their website in background)

Let me know if you want more info, happy to send something over :)

Best,

Sameer

PS - Did the Merlion manage to sprinkle some sunshine on Singapore for you today?

PPS - By the way, your LinkedIn headline is fantastic! Was it "Assured ROAS with AI-driven Ad Strategies | Founder of 88 Ventures & QuickAds | Ex-McKinsey Partner | Angel Investor"?

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